Diction and word choice
Rewrite the three body paragraphs using an academic style and
making the necessary changes to correct the mistakes. Underline the
modifications you will make.
•Intellectually,
learning a foreign language at an early age enables children to develop their
brain. At this young age, Parents notice their children’s limitless capacities.
They have less inhibition or biases against learning different subjects. They
can learn one, two or three languages without confusion. Indeed, they can learn
several languages without being disoriented. It’d only serve to expand their
minds and develop their thinking.
Therefore, it’s ideal to start teaching a foreign language in
kindergarten.
•Socially, learning a
foreign language enables the young child to enter a wider cultural world. By
learning to speak, think and understanding a different language. The child
develops greater cross-cultural awareness. This critical ability enables the
child to make friends with, identify with and empathize with others who speaks
the additional language.
Professionally, by
learning a foreign language in kindergarten, the child expands his/her future
career horizons. In today’s increasingly globalized world. Bilingual and
multilingual individuals are in high demand. People who speak more than one
language are wanted. The child who achieves this fluency easily and with a
natural manner at a young age already has an edge over others in the job
market.